Comments on: Casio’s Dream

By: Redguy

Redguy — Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000

Great write. I loved the elements of Revelation that were in it. I do get thrown off (confused) when Gabrielle is addressed by the narrator. I feel sorry for Casio.

By: awayken.com | comedown

awayken.com | comedown — Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000

The story is a little confusing that way because the Gabrielle that the narrator is addressing lives in the present (our present) but the action takes place in the future. That is why his explanations seem to suggest that these things haven't happened yet.

By: OD

OD — Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000

I agree with the Redguy that the multiple references to Gabrielle made things hard to understand. Also, could have used a little more character development. But other than those minor details, it was very good. Kudos to you.

By: Lacey

Lacey — Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000

Hey I thought it was really good. And gripping. I'm supposed to be somewhere right now, but I had to finish reading it to see what happened. And also, I'm givin up the bottle, right now!

By: alan

alan — Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000

um..............
well.... it was very detailed ..in a good way ofcorse....
id have to say.... it was really really really long for me... i cant concentraite that long... oboy
but.. not my favorite post.. sorry miles..
lates
alan

By: OD

OD — Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000

Yeah, Alan, I feel your pain. Staying focused for a long time can be difficult. But I read this article that..... Hey! Let's go ride our bikes!!!